Just asking for a friend.

No really, my friend wants to know if this is a good idea or not. I’ve read a draft and can see why they want to send it. They feel hard done by at work, and want to make sure that they show a bit of backbone and not be seen as an easy target. It’s a factual email that gets perhaps a little emotional towards the end. And it’s long, very long.

Best to not send it? Or best to shorten it and make it even more factual?

They are borderline thinking of quitting but they do enjoy their job, and want to do the best job they can do.